1.The Commonwealth games helps develop friendship and togthernes. By working together in a team they mit win .They all playing fair together .
2.The Telea family help all around Glen Innes.They are so supportive to the maniakalani
schools. If the Telea family did not support our school we wouldn't be so amazing.
3.I will want to be a person who lets lots of people join in so they will want to enjoy ther sporting love it. I will travel around the world and help them all over the world
You need to think carefully about punctuation Kaya. I really enjoy your ideas and would like to see them written in a bit more detail and a bit clearer.
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